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Re: A breath without a life
Good poem you are creative A BREATH WITHOUT A LIFE Melvin Banggollay We need to breath to live, to see the birds fly To feel the wind as it leaves. ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: December
You did well i enjoy your rythm. But throughout the poem you got me confused are you blind in eyes literally or emotionally. Try to make it clear next time, ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Oh High Plains Drifter *Edited*
Am not much of a poet but i think you did a great job with your story making it a poem. But i must add that your words at the ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: The Angel's Sword, chapter 1(rated 12+ for violence)
Your story line which was wat attracted me in d first place is beautiful i love it . "I came here to kill you," Willard growled, approaching again with his ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: The Devil Has Dimples (Prologue + Chapter 1)
the title of your story fits a typical hight school story but the fears that penny had in her was a little exaggerated for this setting thinking of death from ...
Nov 10, 2009